DangerBoy wrote:It's the mouths. The mouths are killing me. I loved the initial Erfabet posts, but that last few mouths on the characters (second Wanda, the "F" Parson and even a little bit the Marie) are just lines. One of the great things about both Jaime's and Xin's art was the facial expressions, and these feel like they have sort of been phoned in artistically. David, not sure if you're reading these, but if you can just put a tiny more detail in the "mouth art" (I can't believe I just typed that), I think you'll have all of the pieces in place. I'm really forward to seeing your work in the next book!
LTDave wrote:I found the one with Wanda torturing Jillian incredibly disturbing - not because of the art work, but because of the background from book zero.
That scene from book 1 is now incredibly horrible, given the events of book zero.
Sir_Dr_D wrote:This is the last erfabet update? But don't we still have a few more letters left, such as z and d?
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