DangerBoy wrote:It's the mouths. The mouths are killing me. I loved the initial Erfabet posts, but that last few mouths on the characters (second Wanda, the "F" Parson and even a little bit the Marie) are just lines. One of the great things about both Jaime's and Xin's art was the facial expressions, and these feel like they have sort of been phoned in artistically. David, not sure if you're reading these, but if you can just put a tiny more detail in the "mouth art" (I can't believe I just typed that), I think you'll have all of the pieces in place. I'm really forward to seeing your work in the next book!
Speaking of mouths, am I the only one who has trouble deciding whether the archon's mouth in third panel here
is open or she just has huge lips? =)