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Re: Erfabet

Postby LTDave » Tue Jun 18, 2013 11:40 pm

I found the one with Wanda torturing Jillian incredibly disturbing - not because of the art work, but because of the background from book zero.

That scene from book 1 is now incredibly horrible, given the events of book zero.
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Re: Erfabet

Postby zilfallon » Wed Jun 19, 2013 5:34 am

GK looks awesome.
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Re: Erfabet

Postby Klear » Wed Jun 19, 2013 5:44 am

DangerBoy wrote:It's the mouths. The mouths are killing me. I loved the initial Erfabet posts, but that last few mouths on the characters (second Wanda, the "F" Parson and even a little bit the Marie) are just lines. One of the great things about both Jaime's and Xin's art was the facial expressions, and these feel like they have sort of been phoned in artistically. David, not sure if you're reading these, but if you can just put a tiny more detail in the "mouth art" (I can't believe I just typed that), I think you'll have all of the pieces in place. I'm really forward to seeing your work in the next book!


Speaking of mouths, am I the only one who has trouble deciding whether the archon's mouth in third panel here is open or she just has huge lips? =)
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Re: Erfabet

Postby Vreejack » Wed Jun 19, 2013 8:16 am

Meh. Jaime's mouths drove me crazy. I always thought his rows of teeth were white lips.

I like the shot of GK.
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Re: Erfabet

Postby Shai_hulud » Wed Jun 19, 2013 10:09 am

Klear wrote:Speaking of mouths, am I the only one who has trouble deciding whether the archon's mouth in third panel here is open or she just has huge lips? =)
Damn it, can't unsee. You ass.
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Re: Erfabet

Postby LordAcme » Wed Jun 19, 2013 6:58 pm

LTDave wrote:I found the one with Wanda torturing Jillian incredibly disturbing - not because of the art work, but because of the background from book zero.

That scene from book 1 is now incredibly horrible, given the events of book zero.


I would agree, but remember it's Jillian's choice to be there. That's like the 6th time or so. Kinda takes the edge off for me.
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Re: Erfabet

Postby LordBiscuit » Thu Jun 20, 2013 2:31 am

Ceaser and Bunny are adorable together. Also, love the Jetstone units panicking that Xin abducted Trem
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Re: Erfabet

Postby Sir_Dr_D » Thu Jun 20, 2013 6:03 am

This is the last erfabet update? But don't we still have a few more letters left, such as z and d?
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Re: Erfabet

Postby LordBiscuit » Thu Jun 20, 2013 7:07 am

Sir_Dr_D wrote:This is the last erfabet update? But don't we still have a few more letters left, such as z and d?

Zhopa, Dance-fighting.
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Re: Erfabet

Postby Xarx » Thu Jun 20, 2013 7:57 am

LordBiscuit wrote:Zhopa, Dance-fighting.


Someone please draw this. :twisted:

...on second thought, no.
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Re: Erfabet

Postby frei » Thu Jun 20, 2013 8:27 am

amazing last panel.

Really loved the Erphabet -- even where it's been "weird" seeming or a break from tradition -- and having daily erf material for weeks.
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Re: Erfabet

Postby Simons Mith » Thu Jun 20, 2013 10:07 am

Bub, but, but wait! Where are the Elvis costumes?!?
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Re: Erfabet

Postby drachefly » Thu Jun 20, 2013 1:21 pm

Hamstard looks grimly relieved he's off on the side. 'Could be worse', he's thinking. 'I could be prominently placed.'
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Re: Erfabet

Postby Kaed » Thu Jun 20, 2013 5:54 pm

I wanna hug Tremmenis too :C
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Postby Vreejack » Thu Jun 20, 2013 6:13 pm

Really nice group shot.
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Re: Erfabet

Postby StClair » Fri Jun 21, 2013 2:23 am

All together now:

"Awwwwwww."
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Re: Erfabet

Postby zilfallon » Fri Jun 21, 2013 8:30 am

dat gwiffon...

dat dwagon...

dat tool...

dem archons...

dat...everything

cute!
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Re: Erfabet

Postby Shai_hulud » Fri Jun 21, 2013 9:25 am

zilfallon wrote:dat gwiffon...
cute!

So squishy looking... Megalogwif foam toys as future merchandise?
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Re: Erfabet

Postby LordBiscuit » Fri Jun 21, 2013 10:59 am

Just a plush. I'd buy an armada if I could
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Re: Erfabet

Postby Shai_hulud » Fri Jun 21, 2013 1:09 pm

Doesn't seem right if they lack maximum squishy-ness.
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