imgran wrote:Holy hell, that's stupid, Jillian.
And you're surprised?
Back to the update. I liked it.
For one, it shows the characters as they interact.
Jillian acts like the Jillian we know (not so much stupid, but a curious blend of only caring for what she wants and not for what is polite/ethical/possible).
And Tremennis ... ugh I may be swaying to the Trem side ... anyway, Tremennis shows some
similarity with his brothers. Apparently both he and Ossomer would dismiss ill-considered plans as inefficient. Nice touch showing the cross-influences there.
There's even some clever turn-talk (for a change, thank you Jesus! I mean Titans) coming from Jillian of all people, so yeah. Let's move on, I can't wait to see what's next.
is the time for that Ansom inner monologue again?
The whole point of this is lost if you keep it a secret.