Hopefully this will work as intended...
thoughts?

yay wrote:Nice. can't really say much cause it's the first chapter, but looks like it is heading in a good direction.
i think you used thinkamancer and turnamancer interchangebly when the two casters meet.


Nihila wrote:Nice. But do the Tonks have Hits?

ragingrage wrote:I like it a lot. I'm imagining that the thinkamaccer will be sent back and forth like a tennis ball, captured by one side and then the other...

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