Comments on "the Frozen Conflict"

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Comments on "the Frozen Conflict"

Postby Trost » Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:01 pm

Hopefully this will work as intended...

thoughts?
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Re: Comments on "the Frozen Conflict"

Postby yay » Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:13 pm

Nice. can't really say much cause it's the first chapter, but looks like it is heading in a good direction.

i think you used thinkamancer and turnamancer interchangebly when the two casters meet.
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Re: Comments on "the Frozen Conflict"

Postby Trost » Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:16 pm

yay wrote:Nice. can't really say much cause it's the first chapter, but looks like it is heading in a good direction.

i think you used thinkamancer and turnamancer interchangebly when the two casters meet.


I'll double check that.
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Re: Comments on "the Frozen Conflict"

Postby Nihila » Tue Nov 16, 2010 9:19 pm

Nice. But do the Tonks have Hits?
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Re: Comments on "the Frozen Conflict"

Postby Trost » Tue Nov 16, 2010 9:48 pm

Nihila wrote:Nice. But do the Tonks have Hits?


I knew I forgot a stat...

They should have 12 hit.
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Re: Comments on "the Frozen Conflict"

Postby ragingrage » Wed Nov 17, 2010 6:47 pm

I like it a lot. I'm imagining that the thinkamaccer will be sent back and forth like a tennis ball, captured by one side and then the other...
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Re: Comments on "the Frozen Conflict"

Postby Trost » Wed Nov 17, 2010 11:02 pm

ragingrage wrote:I like it a lot. I'm imagining that the thinkamaccer will be sent back and forth like a tennis ball, captured by one side and then the other...


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